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describe a city you have been to

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Nha Trang is a seaside city and also a metropolis. It is a political, economic, cultural, scientific and tourist center of Khanh Hoa province. It's located in the South Central region and on Cái River, which is the biggest rive in Khanh Hoa province with seventy nine kilometers. Besides, this city has a tropical climate. It's often dries from January to August and wet from September to December. Moreover, Nha Trang has many beauty-spot and it is famous for the seafood, cuisine, beaches, restaurants. It's also home of the famous Po Nagar Tower builts by the Champa. Simultanously, it appeals to the tourists for its historical site. Furthermore, it's rich in minerals, marine and forest resources. The thing I like most here are the cultural, temples, pagodas and especially the nightlife. In short, Nha Trang is an unmissable city, so if I have a chance, I will come back here.
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is a seaside city and
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a metropolis. It is a political, economic, cultural, scientific and tourist center of
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Khanh
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located in the South Central region and on
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River, which is the biggest rive in
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Khanh
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Hoa
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seventy nine
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, this city has a tropical climate.
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dries from January to August and wet from September to December.
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has
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beauty-spot and it is
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famous
for the seafood, cuisine, beaches, restaurants.
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also
home of the
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Po Nagar Tower
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builts
by the
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Champa
.
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Simultanously
, it appeals to the tourists for its historical site.
Furthermore
,
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rich in minerals, marine and forest resources. The thing I like most here are the cultural, temples, pagodas and
especially
the nightlife. In short,
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Nha
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Trang
is an unmissable city,
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IELTS essay describe a city you have been to

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