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The subject which you do not want to study

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In education, perhaps the students love chemistry. But my hate subject is Chemistry because of several reasons. The first reason I hate this subject is that it is a difficult subject. I try to learn that subject but don't success. I point out this subject that isn't an important part of the career future. Besides, my chemistry teacher is very strictly, don't friendly with our students. Therefore, i don't have an impression with this subject. When I have to face with that subject, I felt very stressful. I encounter with their trouble when I learn it. In other words, i feel very dull and boring and really I want to get away from that learn times. In conclusion, that subject would be made me tired and exhausted. But, I will try to improve this subject. Fistly, I must think that subject that is an essential part their career. I will try to get long with my teacher to receive the advice and support about her.
In education, perhaps the students
love
chemistry.
But
my hate
subject
is Chemistry
because
of several reasons. The
first
reason I hate this
subject
is that it is a difficult
subject
. I try to learn that
subject
but
don't success. I point out this
subject
that isn't an
important
part of the career future.
Besides
, my chemistry teacher is
very
strictly
, don't friendly with our students.
Therefore
,
i
don't have an impression with this
subject
. When I
have to
face with that
subject
, I felt
very
stressful. I encounter with their trouble when I learn it.
In other words
,
i
feel
very
dull and boring and
really
I want to
get
away from that learn times.
In conclusion
, that
subject
would
be made
me tired and exhausted.
But
, I will try to
improve
this
subject
.
Fistly
, I
must
think
that
subject
that is
an essential part their career. I will try to
get
long with my teacher to receive the advice and support about her.
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IELTS essay The subject which you do not want to study

Essay
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1 paragraphs
165 words
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