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Describe a challenge you have faced and how you overcame it.

Describe a challenge you have faced and how you overcame it. 3gO8Y
“Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself. ” - George Bernard Shaw. By this quote I should say that it is not an easy thing to speak about myself as it is hard to have a look at yourself from aside, but at the same time who knows you better than you. You and only you create yourself. And in following essay I will describe myself as I see. Firstly, I can definitely say that I'm a very sociable person. It really shouldn't be difficult for me to ask an imperfectly unfamiliar person the answer to any question. My friends even call me a social butterfly. Once at school I'd to talk to a friend who wasn't famous for being particularly sociable, but I managed to get my interlocutor to talk and I gave good advice that could help her in communicating with people in the future. Secondly, I can easily get used to the new environment. In recent years, my family has often moved from one place to another and during this time I've accumulated a lot of experience in adaptation. It's impossible to know in advance what will happen tomorrow - it isn't in our power, but it's in our power how we react to changes. Two years ago, due to quarantine, I was unable to go to the gym, but I started working out and leading an active life at home. Thus, I can assume that these qualities will certainly help me in this program. I'll be glad if you accept me and I'll try my best to make this 27 days a wonderful and memorable one.
“Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself. ”
-
George Bernard Shaw. By this quote I should say that it is not an easy thing to speak about myself as it is
hard
to have a look at yourself from aside,
but
at the same time who knows you better than you. You and
only
you create yourself. And in following essay I will
describe
myself as I
see
.

Firstly
, I can definitely say that I'm a
very
sociable person. It
really
shouldn't be difficult for me to ask an
imperfectly
unfamiliar person the answer to any question. My friends even call me a social butterfly. Once at school I'd to talk to a friend who wasn't
famous
for being
particularly
sociable,
but
I managed to
get
my interlocutor to talk and I gave
good
advice that could
help
her in communicating with
people
in the future.

Secondly
, I can
easily
get
used
to the new environment. In recent years, my family has
often
moved
from one place to another and during this time I've accumulated
a lot of
experience in adaptation. It's impossible to know in advance what will happen tomorrow
-
it isn't in our power,
but
it's in our power how we react to
changes
. Two years ago, due to quarantine, I was unable to go to the gym,
but
I
started
working out and leading an active life at home.

Thus
, I can assume that these qualities will
certainly
help
me in this program. I'll be glad if you accept me and I'll try my best to
make
this 27 days a wonderful and memorable one.
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IELTS essay Describe a challenge you have faced and how you overcame it.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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