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Describe a building that you do not like.

Describe a building that you do not like. keXln

The first thing that catches my eye is the building facades and the second one is the positive or negative signals that we recieve from it. There is a four-story building near our house which is used as a general clinic. Not only is the facade of the building awful, but inside it is horrible, and I have hated this building since I was a child. The inside of the building is full of sick people who have to wait in long lines every day. The rooms of this clinic are tiny and are connected by long and narrow corridors. The plaster has been removed from the walls and needs to be repainted. The smell of alcohol is everywhere and I do not like this atmosphere. With all this, I believe that the main reason I do not like this building is that my grandfather died there before my eyes when I was only 8 years old. I still can not forget the bad feeling that I felt by what I saw there.

The first
 thing that catches my eye is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 facades and the second one is the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 signals that we Possible spelling mistake found.receiverelieve
recieve
 from it. There is a four-story You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 near our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as a general clinic. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 is the facade of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 awful, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 inside it is horrible, and I have hated this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 since I was a child. The inside of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 is full of sick This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 wait in long lines every day. The rooms of this clinic are tiny and are connected
 by long and narrow corridors. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 plaster has been removed
 from the walls and needs to be repainted
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 smell of alcohol is everywhere and I do not like this atmosphere. With all this, I believe that the main reason I do not like this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 is that my grandfather This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passed away
died
 there This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 my eyes when I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 8 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. I still
 can not forget the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 feeling that I felt by what I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 there. 