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Describe a building that you do not like.

Describe a building that you do not like. keXln
The first thing that catches my eye is the building facades and the second one is the positive or negative signals that we recieve from it. There is a four-story building near our house which is used as a general clinic. Not only is the facade of the building awful, but inside it is horrible, and I have hated this building since I was a child. The inside of the building is full of sick people who have to wait in long lines every day. The rooms of this clinic are tiny and are connected by long and narrow corridors. The plaster has been removed from the walls and needs to be repainted. The smell of alcohol is everywhere and I do not like this atmosphere. With all this, I believe that the main reason I do not like this building is that my grandfather died there before my eyes when I was only 8 years old. I still can not forget the bad feeling that I felt by what I saw there.
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first
thing that catches my eye is the
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facades and the second one is the
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positive
or
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negative
signals that we
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recieve
from it. There is a four-story
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building
near our
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house
which is
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used
as a general clinic. Not
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only
is the facade of the
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building
awful,
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but
inside it is horrible, and I have hated this
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building
since I was a child. The inside of the
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building
is full of sick
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people
who
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have to
wait in long lines every day. The rooms of this clinic are tiny and
are connected
by long and narrow corridors.
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The
plaster has
been removed
from the walls and needs to
be repainted
.
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The
smell of alcohol is everywhere and I do not like this atmosphere. With all this, I believe that the main reason I do not like this
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building
is that my grandfather
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died
there
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before
my eyes when I was
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only
8 years
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old
. I
still
can not forget the
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bad
feeling that I felt by what I
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saw
there.

IELTS essay Describe a building that you do not like.

Essay
  American English
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173 words
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