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degrated land over the world

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Speaker is telling about degraded land and ecosystems, In our world have 10, 000 million lands degraded land, how to fix it? . Simply vast planting trees with the help of advanced machines. Also, She is telling us about we bring native complex ecosystems. In Australia drone base planting for biodiversity-ecosystem. It can help nature and humans. A few years ago in Australia vast trees burnt due to fire. We need to think about it.
Speaker is telling about degraded land and ecosystems, In our world have 10, 000 million lands degraded land, how to
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fix
it?
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.
Simply
vast planting trees with the
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help
of advanced machines.
Also
, She is telling us about we bring native complex ecosystems. In Australia drone base planting for biodiversity-ecosystem. It can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
nature and humans. A few years ago in Australia vast trees burnt due to fire. We need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about it.

IELTS essay degrated land over the world

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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