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Decribes your country or city

Decribes your country or city Bg2lw
In this day and age, a number of developed countries frequently backing financial for developing countries to improve the quality life for citizens. on the contrary it does not solve poverty, in my point of view, i believe rich countries should do some other ways for helping needy countries. it is undoubted true that some developed countries supported financial aid for developing countries was the most useful. First of all, for poor countries or some countries where have pandemic or disaster, money is the best way to improve the immediate situation and save a number of people. However, just give money to poorer countries could not solve poverty, i suppose the main reason because this types need a huge amount of money without a country that can give. On the other hand, there are variety steps that the government of rich countries could take the tackle. Firstly, the rich countries support the educational development by giving scholarships or improving educational method for schools. From that point, the poor countries can ensure the young intellectual workforce in the future. In addition, other best type of help to the poor countries is provided some advanced technology in production and life. This way not only helps production output rise on the contrary also makes product quality better. For example, instead of harvesting the rice by traditional methods, using morder technology will help the farmer harvest fastly and the quality of rice also better. To sum up, I believe the government of developed countries should give some other measures to support difficult countries instead of increasing financial support.
In this day and age, a number of developed
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frequently
backing financial for developing
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to
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the quality life for citizens.
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on
the contrary it does not solve poverty, in my point of view,
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i
believe rich
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should do
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some
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other
ways for helping needy countries.

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developed
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supported financial aid for developing
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was the most useful.
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, for poor
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or
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some
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where have pandemic or disaster, money is the best way to
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improve
the immediate situation and save a number of
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people
.

However
,
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give money to poorer
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could not solve poverty,
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i
suppose the main reason
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this types need a huge amount of money without a
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that can give. On the
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hand, there are variety steps that the
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government
of rich
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could take the tackle.
Firstly
, the rich
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countries
support the educational development by giving scholarships or improving educational method for schools. From that point, the poor
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countries
can ensure the young intellectual workforce in the future.
In addition
,
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other
best type of
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help
to the poor
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countries
is provided
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some
advanced technology in production and life. This way not
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only
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helps
production output rise
on the contrary
also
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makes
product quality better.
For example
,
instead
of harvesting the rice by traditional methods, using
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morder
technology will
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help
the farmer harvest
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fastly
and the quality of rice
also
better.

To sum up, I believe the
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government
of developed
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should give
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measures to support difficult
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instead
of increasing financial support.
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IELTS essay Decribes your country or city

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
6.0
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