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decribe your favorite program

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today i will decribe my favorite program. Nowaday, there are a lot of program such as travel show, cartoon, the news and comedy but if i decide which program i like the most, it will be ''animal world''. I alway folow and watch it. It broadcast at 2 p. m every saturday afternoon. In this program, stories of the animal over the world are told lively and intersting. I can find every activity of animal such as bird, monkey, elephant, . . . They are so cute. I learn that it is diffcult to protect and take care them. This program bring for me many good thing. It make me feel happy when i feel down or bored. It give me many animal knowledge so that is the reason i like animal world the most
today
i
will
decribe
my favorite
program
.
Nowaday
, there are
a lot of
program
such as travel
show
, cartoon, the news and comedy
but
if
i
decide which
program
i
like the most, it will be ''animal world''. I
alway
folow
and
watch
it. It broadcast at 2 p. m every
saturday
afternoon. In this
program
, stories of the
animal
over the world are
told
lively and
intersting
. I can find every activity of
animal
such as bird, monkey, elephant
, .
.
.
They are
so
cute. I learn that it is
diffcult
to protect and take care them. This
program
bring for me
many
good
thing. It
make
me feel happy when
i
feel down or bored. It
give
me
many
animal
knowledge
so
that is
the reason
i
like
animal
world the
most
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IELTS essay decribe your favorite program

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