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Decribe an activity after college.

Decribe an activity after college. r15Ko

I do some activities after my college. Although, i don't have sufficient time to do extra curriculum activities due to study work but i do some outdoor activities. My college time is in the morning that's why i don't have adequate time to do exercise so two years ago, I decided to do exercise at evening time with my friend her name is khyati and also She is my neighbor. However, i am very health conscience person so i never skip exercise even one day. everyday i go in gym it name is perfect body gym which is near about my house. So Me and my friend daily go there and every day do exercise approximately 2 hr. Furthermore, after doing exercise we walk on pavement. I do many distinguish sorts of activities like indoor cycling, pushups and dumbbell row, etc. I do these types of activities with vigilance because sometimes we do not with proper way then it's become harmful effect on health. Firstly when i commenced exercise that time i feel very tired and my whole body was in pain but i adamant with my decision. Eventually, after passes some day i feel better doing exercise. consequently, it's effective result on my body. Now It has become a part of my routine and if I do miss it that than i feel very guilty.

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some
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activities
 after my college. Although, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 don't have sufficient You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 to do extraPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
curriculum activitiesPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
due to study work This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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i
 do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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activities
. My college You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 is in the morning that's why Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 don't have adequate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 to do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingtasklessonworkoutactproblem
exercise
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so
 two years ago, I decided to do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingtasklessonworkoutactproblem
exercise
 at evening You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 with my friend her name is Possible spelling mistake found.khakiKYTIHyatt
khyati
 and also
 She is my neighbor. However
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 am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 health conscience person This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 never skip You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingtasklessonworkoutactproblem
exercise
 even one day. 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
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i
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go in gym it Did you mean "names"?names
name
 is perfect body gym which is near about my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 Me and my friend daily go there and every day doPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
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exercise
 approximately 2 hr. Furthermore
, after doing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingtasklessonworkoutactproblem
exercise
 we walk on pavement. I do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 distinguish sorts of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 like indoor cycling, Possible spelling mistake found.push ups
pushups
 and dumbbell row, etc.Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
I do these types of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 with vigilance This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 we do not with proper way then it's become harmful effect on health. Firstly
 when Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 commenced You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingtasklessonworkoutactproblem
exercise
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 tired and my whole body was in pain This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 i adamant with my decision. Eventually
, after passes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 day Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 feel betterPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
doing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingtasklessonworkoutactproblem
exercise
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterConsequently
consequently
,Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
Did you mean "its effective result"?its effective result
it's effective result
 on my body. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 It has become a part of my routine and if I do miss it that than Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 guilty. 