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Decribe about your perfect house

Decribe about your perfect house RWGVP

As you know, everyone wishes their own dream house and I’m no exception. So, today I’m going to talk about my perfect house where I want to live in in the future. Well, my dream house for me would be a house in the suburbs which is a peaceful area but it’s not far from the city center. To be honest, maybe I find myself adapting to the bustling environment in the city. However, I believe that after a long day at work, I need a comfortable environment. As a result, suburban living is a fantastic fit for me. It would be a lovely two-story marble house. My residence consists of three bedrooms, a large living room, a balcony, and a swimming pool. I find a house like this very comforting to blow at some steam after a hectic week of work. Each of bedrooms has a double bed, a wardrobe and an ensuite bedroom. Of course, the house must be well-equipped with modern appliances, things like a double-door fridge, an interactive TV or an air purifier and so on. My room is located at the top of the house where I can see the entire city every morning. The other rooms will be for my parents and my sister when they come to visit me. Besides, I utilize my balcony to cultivate flowers and plants, which helps to make my home feel more spacious and lighter, and I can also watch the sky and enjoy the gentle breeze. I think so. Well, I'm not know what your dream home will look like but I believe my house is wonderful. I am hopeful that I will be able to complete my perfect house in the future. That’s all I want to share about my perfect house.

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