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- Deal with all guest requests promptly, taking personal responsibility to ensure guest satisfaction.

- Deal with all guest requests promptly, taking personal responsibility to ensure guest satisfaction. gbV1d
Main responsibilities: - Have a warm greet, check-in, make recommendations, check-out and related services - Deal with all guest requests promptly, taking personal responsibility to ensure guest satisfaction. Achievement and skills gained: - Took appreciated the opportunity to learn the fundamentals of the hospitality industry and practice English communication skills. - Proudly received the company's probation and officially offered after 02 months internship. Main responsibilities:
Main responsibilities:

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Have a warm greet,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
-in,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
recommendations,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
-out and related services

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Deal with all guest requests
promptly
, taking personal responsibility to ensure guest satisfaction.

Achievement and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
gained:

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.
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Took appreciated the opportunity to learn the fundamentals of the hospitality industry and practice English communication
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.
-
Proudly
received the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's probation and
officially
offered after 02 months internship. Main responsibilities:

IELTS essay - Deal with all guest requests promptly, taking personal responsibility to ensure guest satisfaction.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
65 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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