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The rule in your family for your friend visit your house

The rule in your family for your friend visit your house b2kjl

Firstly, respecting privacy rights is the most essential rule in my family. For example, before entering someone’s room you should knock the door and do not touch anything things without permission. It will create a comfortable atmosphere for each member in the family. The second important rule in my family is going to bed before 10p. m. My parents are always busy with teaching everyday so they cannot sleep enough, consequently they frequently have headaches. It is the reason why all the members need to go to bed early like that. Therefore, our health can improve and it also helps our work become more effective. The third rule is keeping our room tidy before the end of the day. I was taught to arrange every single thing in my life since I was a child. It helps me become more disciplined and forms a good lifestyle. Keeping my room tidy can also create a comfortable space for me to study energetically and sleep soundly. Last but not least, there’s always a get-together day at home at weekend. This is the time to sit down and share joys, sadness and difficulties or express your own opinions. It’s the most joyful moment of the week, when I can let go of the pressure and get closer to my family. I think you will have a great time here.

Firstly
, respecting privacy rights is the most essential This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 in my family. For example
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 entering someone’s room you should knock the door and do not touch anything things without permission. It will create a comfortable atmosphere for each member in the family.

The second This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 in my family is going to bed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 10p. m. My parents are always busy with teaching everyday This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they cannot sleep This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
, consequently
 they frequently
 have headaches. It is the reason why all the members need to go to bed early like that. Therefore
, our health can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 and it also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 our work become more effective.

The third This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 is keeping our room tidy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the day. I was taught
 to arrange every single thing in my life since I was a child. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me become more disciplined and forms a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 lifestyle. Keeping my room tidy can also
 create a comfortable space for me to study energetically
 and sleep soundly
.

Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, there’s always a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
-together day at home at weekend. This is the time to sit down and share joys, sadness and difficulties or express your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 opinions. It’s the most joyful moment of the week, when I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 go of the pressure and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 closer to my family. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you will have a great time here. 