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Cyberbullying, where new technologies such as the Internet or mobile phones are used to bully and harass young people, is on the increase. Explain the causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions for individuals and schools. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Cyberbullying, where new technologies such as the Internet or mobile phones are used to bully and harass young people, is on the increase. Explain the causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions for individuals and schools. b2jdQ

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