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Some people wear western dress instead of traditional cloths. Why is this . It has postive or negative effect.

Some people wear western dress instead of traditional cloths. Why is this. It has postive or negative effect. VyWjD

In the modern era, individuals influence by other masses such as actors, modals etcetera and wearing western dress in their daily life or distinct occassion. By that they forgot their cultural garments. It is a negative trend in the forthcoming deliberation I will discuss my point of view. To embark on the preponderant one is that follow their favourite actor or singer. To elaborate it, major of folks wear western garments to show their love by the actor. To get some type of cloth which were wear by the modal in movies. Hence, it effect on masses to wearing fashionable outfits in everyday. Furthermore, the readymade cloths were made by various type of fibre so, it is very comfortable to take in any occasions and it live long rather than native duds. Consequently, myriad of masses prefer to wear. Moving further, it has some negative effect on economy. First and foremost, it create unemployment. To examplify it, the most of the traditional outfit were made by tailors. After the trend of the modern cloth day by day the tailor work decline. As a result, they were unemployment own to fact that, they do not take a new occupation. Secondly, by taking fashionable garments they adapt the other culture and they does not know about that. Most of time teenager were do it. Subsequently, they change their mother tongue and talk in other language. To recapitulate, I pen down to say that it has more negative effect instead than positive and masses should focus on that.

In the modern era, individuals influence by other masses such as actors, modals etcetera and wearing western dress in their daily life or distinct Possible spelling mistake found.occasion
occassion
. By that they forgot their cultural garments. It is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 trend in the forthcoming deliberation I will discuss my point of view.

To embark on the preponderant one is that follow their Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
 actor or singer. To elaborate it, major of folks wear western garments to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 by the actor. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 type of cloth which were wear by the modal in movies. Hence
, it Did you mean "effects"?effects
effect
 on masses to wearing fashionable outfits in 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
. Furthermore
, the Possible spelling mistake found.ready made
readymade
 cloths were made
 by various type of Possible spelling mistake. 'fibre' is British English.fiber
fibre
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 comfortable to take in any occasions and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
Did you mean "longs"?longs
long
rather
 than native duds. Consequently
, myriad of masses prefer to wear.

Moving further
, it has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effect on economy. First
 and foremost, it Did you mean "creates"?creates
create
 unemployment. To Possible spelling mistake found.exemplifyex amplify
examplify
 it, the most of the traditional outfit were made
 by tailors. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 the trend of the modern cloth day by day the tailor work decline. As a result
, they were unemployment This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 to fact that, they do not take a new occupation. Secondly
, by taking fashionable garments they adapt the other Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).culture, and
culture and
 they The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "do"do
does
 not know about that. Most of time This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenileadolescent
teenager
Did you mean "where" or "we"?wherewe
were
Consider using a past participle here: "done".done
do
 it. Subsequently
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 their mother tongue and talk in other language.

To recapitulate, I pen down to say that it has more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effect instead
 than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and masses should focus on that. 