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Can you discribe a story of porn

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In my poin of view porn is a emotion which is comm in every human being and it is highest pleasure that usually people enjoying but every body has their own fentacies in order to get high in sex, business minded people created a industry on digital plate form with nude contact videos. Using that videos they exploiting the fantacs of people, making money out of it. However problem arise only when people addicted to that contant. Generally problems like physical or mental sometimes people imitate that scenes in practical life which often turn into disaster.
In my
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poin
of view porn is
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a
emotion which is comm in every human being and it is
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highest
pleasure that
usually
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people
enjoying
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but
every body has their
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own
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fentacies
in order to
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get
high in sex, business minded
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people
created
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a
industry on digital plate form with nude contact videos. Using that videos
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they exploiting
the
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fantacs
of
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people
, making money out of it.
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However
problem arise
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only
when
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people
addicted to that
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contant
.
Generally
problems like physical or mental
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sometimes
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people
imitate that scenes in practical life which
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often
turn into disaster.

IELTS essay Can you discribe a story of porn

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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