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Can you discribe a story of porn

Can you discribe a story of porn LLQ6K

In my poin of view porn is a emotion which is comm in every human being and it is highest pleasure that usually people enjoying but every body has their own fentacies in order to get high in sex, business minded people created a industry on digital plate form with nude contact videos. Using that videos they exploiting the fantacs of people, making money out of it. However problem arise only when people addicted to that contant. Generally problems like physical or mental sometimes people imitate that scenes in practical life which often turn into disaster.

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