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cussion about whether people should try to improve in all aspects of life or accept some parts of current situations will be discussed in this article. Is this accepted to stay satisfied with the current condition or we

cussion about whether people should try to improve in all aspects of life or accept some parts of current situations will be discussed in this article. Is this accepted to stay satisfied with the current condition or we NrwAg
The discussion about whether people should try to improve in all aspects of life or accept some parts of current situations will be discussed in this article. Is this accepted to stay satisfied with the current condition or we should criticise the weaknesses of the situation and try to improve. While acceptance might be the key to the satisfaction and avoid some mental pressure, no improvement and success will achieve without trying to improve. To understand and digest the current situations and accept everything as it is, may bring the gift of slight enjoyment, but it can develop mental depression in the same time. If a hypothetical person lives in a reasonable home with decent income from average job, there will not be considerable reasons to argue and complain about the situation. But living under the poverty line and adjusting to the condition with to effort to improvement is not a wise pathway at all! In other hand, to have an energetic personality and actively looking for improvements in all aspects of life can be challenging and rewarding at the same time. People in this category might progress forward all the time, but stress and anxiety can make the situations worsen every day. So not only no success will achieve, but also significant life problems can bring the darkness everywhere! To explain my own point of view I should say, moderation is the golden key to balance ourselves between two extreme points! We all agree that we should be thankful and enjoy what we have. Respect and protect what we achieved so far while there is always room to improve. To make a conclusion, taking the appropriate strategy must be adjusted in regards to out habits, capabilities and abilities to create a better future for everyone without mental or physical harm to selves or others.
The discussion about whether
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people
should try to
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improve
in all aspects of life or accept
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some
parts of
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current
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accepted
to stay satisfied with the
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current
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condition or
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criticise
the weaknesses of the
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situation
and try to
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improve
. While acceptance might be the key to the satisfaction and avoid
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some
mental pressure, no improvement and success will achieve without trying to
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improve
.

To understand and digest the
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current
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situations
and accept everything as it is, may bring the gift of slight enjoyment,
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but
it can develop mental depression in the same time. If a hypothetical person
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lives
in a reasonable home with decent income from average job, there will not be considerable reasons to argue and complain about the
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situation
.
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But
living under the poverty line and adjusting to the condition with to effort to improvement is not a wise pathway at all!

In other hand, to have an energetic personality and
actively
looking for improvements in all aspects of life can be challenging and rewarding at the same time.
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People
in this category might progress forward all the time,
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but
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stress
and anxiety can
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the
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situations
worsen every day.
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not
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only
no success will achieve,
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but
also
significant life problems can bring the darkness everywhere!

To
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explain
my
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own
point of view I should say, moderation is the golden key to balance ourselves between two extreme points! We all
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agree
that we should be thankful and enjoy what we have. Respect and protect what we achieved
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so
far while there is always room to
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improve
.

To
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make
a conclusion, taking the appropriate strategy
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must
be adjusted
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in regards to
out habits, capabilities and abilities to create a better future for everyone without mental or physical harm to selves or others.
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IELTS essay cussion about whether people should try to improve in all aspects of life or accept some parts of current situations will be discussed in this article. Is this accepted to stay satisfied with the current condition or we

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
305 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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