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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However at best these methods are ineffective, and at worse they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.3

Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However at best these methods are ineffective, and at worse they may be dangerous. with this statement? v. 3
Alternative forms of medicine have been around for 1000s of years. Ancient practices to some might seem ineffective and dangerous, especially with a recent revival of non-regulated medicine. To that extent I agree some forms might be useless or unsafe, but disagree that all kinds of alternative medicine are useless. Some forms of alternative treatments are complementary to allopathy/modern medicine. People suffering from long term digestive issues, insomnia, arthritis and chronic back pain have benefitted from complementary medicine practices like Chiropractor and Acupressure. For example, people with insomnia are given heavy doses of medicine which have long term side effects affecting vital organs of the body. While if acupressure is practiced for sleeping, the benefits are there without any side effects. I had numbness in my face and hand, seen numerous specialist for over 6 years, nothing helped except being medicated. I started seeing a chiropractor and he was able to diagnose and change my life, free from pain without taking any medication. The benefits of finding alternative forms medicine can be fruitful and beneficial. A lot of herbal medication is sold unregulated and can be risky to take without consulting with a doctor. They promise quick fixes and cures with promise of better hair, skin & magic weight loss, most are harmless, but a lot can be dangerous, especially if they are offering cures for the tumours and cancers it’s just snake oil and stopping allopathic medical advice for these remedies is not advised. To summarize, falling prey to recent trends of alternative medicine can be dangerous if not taken cautiously. Some forms are very effective and beneficial if practiced in conjunction with modern medicine and improve your quality of life.
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might seem ineffective and
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. To that extent I
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might be useless or unsafe,
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are useless.

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allopathy
/modern
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.
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suffering from long term digestive issues, insomnia, arthritis and chronic back pain have
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from complementary
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practices like Chiropractor and Acupressure.
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,
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people
with insomnia are
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given
heavy doses of
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medicine
which have long term side effects affecting vital organs of the body. While if acupressure
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for sleeping, the benefits are there without any side effects. I had numbness in my face and hand,
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he was able to diagnose and
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change
my life, free from pain without taking any medication. The benefits of finding
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can be fruitful and beneficial.

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herbal medication
is sold
unregulated and can be risky to take without consulting with a doctor. They promise quick
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fixes
and cures with promise of better hair, skin & magic weight loss, most are harmless,
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and cancers it’s
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snake oil and stopping allopathic medical advice for these remedies is not advised.

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, falling prey to recent trends of
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alternative
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medicine
can be
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dangerous
if not taken
cautiously
.
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forms
are
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very
effective and beneficial if practiced in conjunction with modern
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and
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improve
your quality of life.
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IELTS essay Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However at best these methods are ineffective, and at worse they may be dangerous. with this statement? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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