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Crime rate is increasing day by day. What are causes and solutions to solve this crime

Crime rate is increasing day by day. What are causes and solutions to solve this crime D2mkm
Without a doubt everyone know clearly about the crime rate it has been increasing for last few years. However, nowadays it is level has leaped which is really unimaginable for people's. There are some causes as well as solutions of this problem why it is being increased day by day. First and foremost reason is that voilence content which puplis say everyday a lot of time along with their friends. It effects directly or indirectly not on them but also their parents interms of depression,
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know
clearly
about the crime rate it has been increasing for last few years.
However
, nowadays it is level has leaped which is
really
unimaginable for
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people
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some
causes
as well
as solutions of this problem why it is
being increased
day by day.
First
and foremost reason is that
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voilence
content which
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puplis
say
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everyday
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a lot of
time along with their friends. It effects
directly
or
indirectly
not on them
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but
also
their parents
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interms
of depression,
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IELTS essay Crime rate is increasing day by day. What are causes and solutions to solve this crime

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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