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Crime is rising everyday.

Crime is rising everyday. e561G
Crime is being become the mammoth problem for community, jailbirds perpetration the deliquent acts since humankind have no opportunity to attain the job. unemployment is the leading cause of antisocial which can put cast an adverse effect on the society consequently I demm that through the cyberspace people can heighten awareness in around the world. Masses need to turn a new leaf for the declined the felony.
Crime is
being become
the mammoth problem for community, jailbirds perpetration the
deliquent
acts since humankind have no opportunity to attain the job.
unemployment
is the leading cause of antisocial which can put cast an adverse effect on the society
consequently
I
demm
that through the cyberspace
people
can heighten awareness in around the world. Masses need to turn a new leaf for the declined the felony.
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IELTS essay Crime is rising everyday.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
67 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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