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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course.

You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. oR9BB
Respected Principal, I am Kashif Ali S/O Ibrahim Baig, studying Master of Business Administrator and my batch is 2021. I am enrolled in the course of management information system, which is a major course of my programme. I would like to share an important event in my family, which will be held next month and I have to attend this occasion. The duration of the event will be a week (7 days). In this regard, I need a holiday for a week. I am requesting you to please corporate with me to give a week holiday, so I will attend this event. Looking for support from your side You're studentKAshif Ali
Respected Principal, I am
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Kashif
Ali S/O Ibrahim
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Baig
, studying Master of Business Administrator and my batch is 2021. I
am enrolled
in the course of management information system, which is a major course of my
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programme
.

I would like to share an
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important
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event
in my family, which will
be held
next
month and I
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have to
attend this occasion. The duration of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
will be a week (7 days). In this regard, I need a holiday for a week.

I am requesting you to
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please
corporate with me to give a week holiday,
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so
I will attend this
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event
.

Looking for support from your side

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IELTS essay You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
110 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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