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Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it to what extend do you agree or disagrees

Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it s 7N36
The crime is mammoth problem in our world that intensifying day by day that has been the Epicentre of discussion between multiple forums including social media. some Echelons of the society hold this perception that the offence is serious issue all over the world and there is no solution to solve this problem but this point of view Donot favour with me. I believe that it is possible to tackle this serious issue in a number of ways. To set the wheels in motion, there are a plethora of reason in agreement with the given statement. The most conspicuous one is that the police force are increase on the street and front of the malls, banks, shopping center as well as set the camera at these places moreover, the government should provide lot of opportunities for the people because the poverty is main cause of these are the issues if people have own job and work than they don’t create a offence. Furthermore, the government should make a strict role for everyone. The government is announce everyone if they are involve in any illegal work or offence after that they are pay lot of money and send into prisions.  Secondly, the alarming rate also maintain in every house or streets. It’s good for awareness. To encapsulate, having mulled up over the stated information and after deliberating all aspects of the topic can be concluded that there are lot of solutions to solve these type of problems.
The crime is mammoth problem in our world that intensifying day by day that has been the
Epicentre
of discussion between multiple forums including social media.
some
Echelons of the society hold this perception that the
offence
is serious issue all over the world and there is no solution to solve this problem
but
this point of view
Donot
favour
with me. I believe that it is possible to tackle this serious issue in a number of ways. To set the wheels in motion, there are a plethora of reason in agreement with the
given
statement. The most conspicuous one is that the police force are increase on the street and front of the malls, banks, shopping center
as well
as set the camera at these places
moreover
, the
government
should provide
lot of
opportunities for the
people
because
the poverty is main cause of these are the issues if
people
have
own
job and work than they don’t create
a
offence
.
Furthermore
, the
government
should
make
a strict role for everyone. The
government
is
announce
everyone if they are
involve
in any illegal work or
offence
after that they are pay lot of money and
send
into
prisions
.  
Secondly
, the alarming rate
also
maintain in every
house
or streets. It’s
good
for awareness. To encapsulate, having mulled up over the stated information and after deliberating all aspects of the topic can
be concluded
that there are lot of solutions to solve these type of problems.
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IELTS essay Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it s

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