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credit vs cash , your preference and why?

credit vs cash, your preference and why? k2lO
Credit Card is nothing but an advanced method of making a payment which would not have been possible without the help of the ever evolving technology industry. And hence, in my opinion, it is the better payment method than cash. The reasons for the same are as follows: Credit cards are super convenient to use in comparison to cash since one needs to carry only one item instead of carrying a pile of cash everywhere. Eventually cash tends to get over and there is always a need to go to an ATM or a bank to withdraw more of cash which by the way also requires you insert a debit card and sometimes, with my own personal experience, ATMs don't tend to work because of which one gets stuck in a loop of trying different ATMs. This, here, is a classic example of wastage of time and resources. Apart from this, there is a limit on number of withdrawals that can be made in a month,  which can definitely
Credit Card is nothing
but
an advanced method of making a payment which would not have been possible without the
help
of the ever evolving technology industry. And
hence
, in my opinion, it is the better payment method than cash.

The reasons for the same are as follows:

Credit cards are super convenient to
use
in comparison
to
cash
since one needs to carry
only
one item
instead
of carrying a pile of
cash
everywhere.

Eventually
cash
tends to
get
over and there is always a need to go to an ATM or a bank to withdraw more of
cash
which by the way
also
requires you insert a debit card and
sometimes
, with my
own
personal experience, ATMs don't tend to work
because
of which one
gets
stuck in a loop of trying
different
ATMs. This, here, is a classic example of wastage of time and resources.

Apart from this, there is a limit on number of withdrawals that can
be made
in a month,
 
which can definitely
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IELTS essay credit vs cash, your preference and why?

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