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credit vs cash , your preference and why?

credit vs cash, your preference and why? k2lO

Credit Card is nothing but an advanced method of making a payment which would not have been possible without the help of the ever evolving technology industry. And hence, in my opinion, it is the better payment method than cash. The reasons for the same are as follows: Credit cards are super convenient to use in comparison to cash since one needs to carry only one item instead of carrying a pile of cash everywhere. Eventually cash tends to get over and there is always a need to go to an ATM or a bank to withdraw more of cash which by the way also requires you insert a debit card and sometimes, with my own personal experience, ATMs don't tend to work because of which one gets stuck in a loop of trying different ATMs. This, here, is a classic example of wastage of time and resources. Apart from this, there is a limit on number of withdrawals that can be made in a month, which can definitely

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