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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your reasons with own knowledge and give examples.

Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do. with this statement? Give your reasons with own knowledge and give examples. P8yK
The issue of freedom of creative artist has extremely grown in importance in most countries over the few decades. It is considered that government should not interfere with their works and the artists should be free to do whatever they want. While I accept many artists are sharing their valuable ideas for the tremendous development of this world, I believe some certain area they should be controlled by the rules and regulation. Admittedly, the human civilisation has approached this sophisticated stage because many creative artists have bestowed us an enormous number of significant ideas and opinions in the form of pictures, music or films. As an example, many creative artists like Leonardo Da Vinci, Pablo Picasso and Michelangelo Buonarroti had first drawn the design of aeroplane; but, at that time nobody could think that human can fly and everybody thought it was just imagined of his mind. Although it required a long time, but it became true that human now can fly. This example makes it clear that the work of artists can lead to immense improvement of humankind. Therefore, many people think that they should be free with their works for the advancement of the human being. On the other hand, there are some vital reasons why the work of artists should be controlled in some certain area. Firstly, most people in this world believe in the God; so the artist should not create such type of acts, which hurt the religion. If this type of activity they make, it may bring colossal embarrassment to the human society. Secondly, the artist should not go against any culture and costume of a country. In this certain field, government can limit the practice of an artist. In conclusion, the creative artists are indispensable in our society although some artists have tended to draw against our cast, creed, and religion. In my opinion, this tendency may call harmful to our mankind so that the government should control the activity, which can go directly against to our culture and religion.
The issue of freedom of
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government
should not interfere with their works and the
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artists
should be free to do whatever they want. While I accept
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are sharing their valuable
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for the tremendous development of this world, I believe
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certain area they should
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and regulation.

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has approached this sophisticated stage
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have bestowed us an enormous number of significant
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ideas
and opinions in the form of pictures, music or films. As an example,
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many
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, Pablo Picasso and Michelangelo
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drawn the design of
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it became true that
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can lead to immense improvement of humankind.
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,
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that they should be free with their works for the advancement of the
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being.
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, there are
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vital reasons why the
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of
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should
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in
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certain area.
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, most
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in this world believe in the God;
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should not create such type of acts, which hurt the religion. If this type of activity they
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make
, it may bring colossal embarrassment to the
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human
society.
Secondly
, the
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artist
should not go against any culture and costume of a country. In this certain field,
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government
can limit the practice of an artist.

In conclusion
, the
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creative
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artists
are indispensable in our society although
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some
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artists
have tended to draw against our cast, creed, and religion.
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In
my opinion, this tendency may call harmful to our mankind
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so
that the
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government
should control the activity, which can go
directly
against to our culture and religion.
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IELTS essay Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do. with this statement? Give your reasons with own knowledge and give examples.

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