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Could you assist in reviewing and approving the drawing?

Could you assist in reviewing and approving the drawing? D2WNE
Could you assist in reviewing and approving the drawing? I have completing in Teamcenter and uploading the drawing into epics also. First, we must release in TC. After the drawing is released which will be generated the watermark. Then we can use and upload it into Epims. The drawing must be has a watermark both the TC and Epims. The drawing will be propagated from Epims to TC automatically one way. The drawing can't propagated form Tc to epims.
Could you assist in reviewing and approving the drawing?

I have completing in
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Teamcenter
and uploading the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drawing
into epics
also
.

First
, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
release in TC.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drawing
is released
which will
be generated
the watermark. Then we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
and upload it into
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Epims
.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drawing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be
Consider using the past participle "had"?
has
a watermark both the TC and
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Epims
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drawing
will
be propagated
from
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Epims
to TC
automatically
one way.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drawing
can't
The verb 'can't' requires base form of this verb: "propagate"
propagated
form Tc to
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epims
.
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IELTS essay Could you assist in reviewing and approving the drawing?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
79 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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