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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.1

Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. with this opinion? v. 1
The rapid increase in the rhythm of modern life enforces people to reduce the specified time for eating and preparing food. This has led to the development of convenience foods that are now presented in a variety and tasty options. Many people argue that these types will replace traditional foods and traditional methods of preparation. However, I claim that will not be the case, outlining the increasing popularity of cookery shows, and how the traditional foods express the different cultures. Firstly, as the media has a great influence on and reflection of the interests of people, measuring the popularity of some type of programs would give some accurate results. Firstly, as the media has a great influence on and reflection of the interests of people, measuring the popularity of some type of programs would give some accurate results. The cookery shows and competitions, where participants compete with each other in preparing food and developing traditional dishes, have a huge audience of all ages. Chefs from all over the world excel in creating new dishes and combining various ingredients to make their food tasty and unique. All this indicates the traditional food will not be replaced in the foreseeable future. Besides, every region of the world has its traditional foods and traditional process of preparation which express their culture and traditions. For example, Sudanese people have a traditional juice called (Hilo-mor), which means (sweet-bitter). The process of preparing this juice is long and difficult, but it expresses their culture and shows their preparation for the holy month (Ramadan). Once some kind of food is associated with a specific culture, it is difficult to be eliminated. Otherwise, identity would be replaced. In summary, traditional foods are gates for the culture of different nations. Moreover, cookery programs show that people are still interested in traditional methods of food preparation. All these refute the claim of replacing the traditional food with convenience food.
The rapid increase in the rhythm of modern life enforces
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people
to
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reduce
the specified time for eating and preparing
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food
. This has led to the development of convenience
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foods
that are
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now
presented in a variety and tasty options.
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people
argue that these types will replace
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traditional
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foods
and
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traditional
methods of
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preparation
.
However
, I claim that will not be the case, outlining the increasing popularity of cookery
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shows
, and how the
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traditional
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foods
express the
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different
cultures.

Firstly
, as the media has a great influence on and reflection of the interests of
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people
, measuring the popularity of
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some
type of programs would give
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some
accurate results.
Firstly
, as the media has a great influence on and reflection of the interests of
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people
, measuring the popularity of
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some
type of programs would give
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some
accurate results. The cookery
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shows
and competitions, where participants compete with each other in preparing
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food
and developing
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traditional
dishes, have a huge audience of all ages. Chefs from all over the world excel in creating new dishes and combining various ingredients to
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make
their
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food
tasty and unique. All this indicates the
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traditional
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food
will not
be replaced
in the foreseeable future.

Besides
, every region of the world has its
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traditional
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foods
and
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traditional
process of
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preparation
which express their
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culture
and traditions.
For example
, Sudanese
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people
have a
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traditional
juice called (
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Hilo-mor
), which means (sweet-bitter). The process of preparing this juice is long and difficult,
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but
it expresses their
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culture
and
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shows
their
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preparation
for the holy month (Ramadan). Once
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some
kind of
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food
is associated
with a specific
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culture
, it is difficult to
be eliminated
.
Otherwise
, identity would
be replaced
.

In summary,
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traditional
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foods
are gates for the
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culture
of
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different
nations.
Moreover
, cookery programs
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show
that
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people
are
still
interested in
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traditional
methods of
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food
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preparation
. All these refute the claim of replacing the
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traditional
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food
with convenience
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food
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
42Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. with this opinion? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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