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companies that have a long average working time are more economically successful than those companies that do not have working time ,Do you agree or disagree ?

companies that have a long average working time are more economically successful than those companies that do not have working time, q5pGE

It is often believe that corporation prolong have long hours for working which would seem to be economically successful than those in same. I personally know that it make effect on personal life. I disagree with this notion and next paragraphs will advocate my view point. To begin with there are number of reasons why it is not vital to work for long hours. First and foremost, the sitting on a place job will effect on the health because white- collar job will do for long time which create obesity in the body when person sit alone. For example, the productivity of tribune newspaper printing decrease in the globe. Furthermore, working in a successful companies employs do not focus on their family because work and life will never equal and they can forget their birthday or anniverssary they do not do domestic housework. TO epitome, they will know the spiral out of control. To recapitulate, although many people like to work at night but people are often late from their corporation.

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often
 believe The verb 'prolong' is plural. Did you mean: "that corporation prolongs"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?that corporation prolongs
that corporation prolong
 have long hours for working which would seem to be economically
Use "(successful)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(successful)
successful
 than those in same. I personally
 know that it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 effect on personal life. I disagree with this notion and next
 paragraphs will advocate my view point. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with there are number of reasons why it is not vital to work for long hours. First
 and foremost, the sitting on a place job will Did you mean "affect"?affect
effect
 on the health This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 white- collar job will do for long time which create obesity in the body when person Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "sits".sits
sit
 alone. For example
, the productivity of tribune newspaper printing decrease in the globe. Furthermore
, working in a successful This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 employs do not focus on their family This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 work and life will never Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).equal, and
equal and
 they can forget their birthday or Possible spelling mistake found.anniversary
anniverssary
 they do not do domestic housework. TO epitome, they will know the spiral out of control.

To recapitulate, although This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 like to work at night This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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people
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 late from their corporation. 