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Confession is good or bad . Write a short confession.

Confession is good or bad. Write a short confession. pRKed
I don't know from where I should start to write. There are so many problems, challenges that I'm facing right now. I belong from joint family where expectations and obligations are surrounded around. A boy from middle class family with plenty of dreams. . . Hoping for that good day to come where I can proudly say " I fulfilled your dreams and promises my mom" It's so hard to say that I lost my Mommy when I was 16 yrs old. And now it has been a more that 2 years, I'm struggling with my soul. My grandmother always taught me to walk in d right way, to fulfil my dreams, do whatever I love to, do what makes me happy. There were no any restrictions for anything that I wanted to do. My parents worked hard, cared, loved and given me an unforgettable memory for my entire life. But suddenly it has gone far away from me. I lived with my elder sisters for 1 year after that incident happened. But I left from there and living alone now. They're trying to support me, but they can't because they're blackmailed (some private things) by my step grandmother so they hesitate to support me and I agree with that if I'm in that place I did the same as they're doing now. My dad got married after some months of my parent's funeral. I never thought my dad will became so cruel. He's totally changed. Their behaviours rudeness really did feel I should leave this world sometimes. I don't have money even to complete my basic Needs. I sacrifice everything for my dad to improve an economic condition of my family. Now they've everything but not for me. They used to deny my happiness, don't even receive my calls. They're living in their own world. I don't have the cash to pay my fees, to buy some foods, clothes and don't have pocket money do I dropped my college. Despite that I fall in love with someone once, but after some period of time she left me because I dint have enough wealth to fulfil her desire. But I really loved her I still love her and I'll be loving her till my last breathe. That was one of d most difficult time for me to recover my life but I cover myself, I had already gone through the hardest time, so I thought I'm living to achieve my mom's goal so I can live without her. In order to win her heart, I lost my own. I'm being the worst and hardest person by everyone, my family, society, relatives, friends, relationship they're blaming me without making any mistakes without hearing my unheard voices. . . . It's so complicated to live alone and hiding problems within your inside. Sudden changes from then to now I'm facing d real challenges of my life. And also there's another a big problem for me, I've got a disease called rheumatic heart disease. . . Its developing fear of losing my life, makes me weaker day by day. It's hard to find a job and to do properly, but I'm still working as a messenger. . . It leads to worsening my health condition. I want to prove myself, but god dint even give me a chance to prove myself my expectations pulling me away. . . . No support no relatives no family, friends, money to buy medication no foods to eat sometimes, but still hoping for better days to come. I'm learning to be happy without depending on anyone. I don't know where life takes me slowly but surely I'll make my way back to myself soon and I believe that'll be the biggest karma myself. . . I'm sharing my problems experience challenges with you guys because it makes me feel better and relief. I want to apologize for any mistakes I've done above along with this text because Idk the way to write a confession. . . So sorry if I've written anything wrong. . . #Tqforreading #godbless #hopetocuremydisease #wanttofullfillmydreams #workhard #livelongandstaypositive #achieveyourgoal❤
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many
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problems
, challenges that I'm facing right
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now
. I belong from joint
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family
where expectations and obligations
are surrounded
around. A boy from middle
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class
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family
with
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plenty
of dreams.
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Hoping for that
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day to
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come
where I can
proudly
say
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"
I fulfilled your dreams and promises my mom
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It's
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so
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to say that I lost my
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Mommy
when I was 16 yrs
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. And
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now
it has been a more that 2 years, I'm struggling with my soul. My grandmother always taught me to walk in d right way, to fulfil my dreams, do whatever I
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love
to, do what
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makes
me happy. There were
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no
any restrictions for anything that I wanted to do. My parents worked
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hard
, cared,
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loved
and
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given
me an unforgettable memory for my entire
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life
.
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But
suddenly
it has gone far away from me. I
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lived
with my elder sisters for 1 year after that incident happened.
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But
I
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left
from there and living alone
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.
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trying to support me,
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they can't
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because
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they're
blackmailed (
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some
private things) by my step grandmother
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so
they hesitate to support me and I
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agree
with that if I'm in that place I did the same as
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doing
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now
. My dad
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got
married after
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some
months of my parent's funeral. I never
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thought
my dad will
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became
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so
cruel. He's
totally
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changed
. Their
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behaviours
rudeness
really
did feel I should
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leave
this world
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sometimes
. I
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don't
have money even to complete my basic

Needs. I sacrifice everything for my dad to
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improve
an economic condition of my
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family
.
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Now
they've everything
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but
not for me. They
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used
to deny my happiness,
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don't
even receive my calls.
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living in their
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own
world. I
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don't
have the cash to pay my fees, to
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buy
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some
foods, clothes and
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don't
have pocket money do I dropped my college.

Despite that I fall in
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love
with someone once,
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but
after
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some
period of time she
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left
me
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because
I
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dint
have
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enough
wealth to fulfil her desire.
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I
really
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loved
her I
still
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love
her and I'll
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be loving
her till my last breathe. That was one of d most difficult time for me to recover my
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life
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but
I cover myself, I had already gone through the hardest time,
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so
I
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thought
I'm living to achieve my mom's goal
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so
I can
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live
without her. In order to win her heart, I lost my
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own
. I'm being the worst and hardest person by everyone, my
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family
, society, relatives, friends, relationship
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they're
blaming me without making any mistakes without hearing my unheard voices.
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.
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.
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.
It's
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so
complicated to
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live
alone and hiding
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problems
within your inside. Sudden
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changes
from then to
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now
I'm facing d real challenges of my
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life
. And
also
there's another a
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big
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problem
for me, I've
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got
a disease called rheumatic heart disease.
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.
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.
Its developing fear of losing my
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life
,
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makes
me weaker day by day. It's
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hard
to find a job and to do
properly
,
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but
I'm
still
working as a messenger.
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.
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It leads to worsening my health condition. I want to prove myself,
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but
god dint even give me a chance to prove myself my expectations pulling me away.
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.
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No support no relatives no
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family
, friends, money to
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buy
medication no foods to eat
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sometimes
,
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but
still
hoping for better days to
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come
. I'm learning to be happy without depending on anyone. I
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don't
know where
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life
takes me
slowly
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but
surely
I'll
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make
my way back to myself
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soon
and I believe that'll be the biggest karma myself.
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.
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.
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I
'm sharing my
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problems
experience challenges with you guys
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because
it
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makes
me feel better and relief.
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I
want to apologize for any mistakes I've done above along with this text
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because
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Idk
the way to write a confession.
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So
sorry if I've written anything
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wrong
.
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Tqforreading
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godbless
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hopetocuremydisease
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wanttofullfillmydreams
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workhard
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livelongandstaypositive
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IELTS essay Confession is good or bad. Write a short confession.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
684 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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