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Concerns about Global warming in this growing world

Concerns about Global warming in this growing world QVJ11
One of the most conspicuos trends of todays world is a colossal upsurge in global warming. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay. There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that concerns about global warming not only contribute to the well-being of the society, buy also numerous other benefits in varioys fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned. Another pivotal aspect of aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of concern of global warming. In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude the the benefits of concerns about global warming are indeed too great to ignore.
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todays
world is a colossal upsurge in
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warming
. There is a widespread worry that this will
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only
lead to a myriad of
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concerns
in one's life.
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explain
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of my stance. The most preponderant one is that
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concerns
about
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global
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warming
not
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contribute to the well-being of the society,
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buy
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numerous other benefits in
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fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not
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can one benefit more when it
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. Another pivotal aspect of aforementioned proposition is that it is
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only
likely to
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help
one thrive and excel in varied areas.
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,
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when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons,
thus
learning such attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance.
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, it is apparent why
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many
are in
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global
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warming
. In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude
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global
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are
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IELTS essay Concerns about Global warming in this growing world

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
230 words
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