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Computers have their advantages and disadvantages.

Computers have their advantages and disadvantages. aw7rV
Today we can't live without computers. In my opinion using computers may be useful and sometimes unhelpful. Computer isn't only used for personal purpose that is mostly use in the organisations. They use it to make a report. Moreover, we can easily get any information by using computers. It makes our life easier. The use of computer puts a world at a different height. But every coin has two side, in that way use of computer has some advantages and also disadvantages. Many people use computers for negative purpose. They play games and chat for a long time. That causes wastage of time. Besides, most computer programs include grammar check, and students might depend on the computer to correct their mistakes. To sum up we can use computers for good or bad goal. It depends on us. If we use computers for good aim, it's better for us.
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unhelpful.

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for personal purpose
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it to
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easily
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get
any information by using computers. It
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our life easier.

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of computer puts a world at a
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negative
purpose. They play games and chat for a long time. That causes wastage of time.
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, most computer programs include grammar
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, and students might depend on the computer to correct their mistakes.

To sum up we can
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computers for
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or
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goal. It depends on us. If we
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aim, it's better for us.

IELTS essay Computers have their advantages and disadvantages.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
148 words
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