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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of the argument and give your own opinion.

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oday, we all have personal computers. We are using them for reading news from internet, watching moovies and lissening music. We can use computers for education too. But can computers education be the same quality as a classic schools education? For example, if I would like to study English, do I need to go to an education center, or my computer is enought? Firstly, computer education is cheaper, then classic education. I spend only less then one thousand rubles for the Internet per month. And I get access to hudreds web sites, witch offered me English study material for free. Secondly I can build my education schedule flexibly. Morning or evening or night, thenewer I have free time, I can open BBC webpage and lissaning speaches from native british people. In addition, it is safe. Espetial in Coronavirus time. I have no chance to be infected over the Internet. However, I found, I have a litle progress in English education. Espetial with speaking and pronuncietion. Why? First of all, my brain is allways found reasons do not lissening BBC dictors, but watching funy youtube movies and ramble over the web. Secondly, computer cant check my prononciation. I need alive native expat, to improve this part of English. In conclusion, I deside to use both education methods. English education center with native English teacher and computer education courses.
oday
, we all have personal computers. We are using them for reading news from internet, watching
moovies
and
lissening
music. We can
use
computers for
education
too.
But
can computers
education
be the same quality as a classic schools
education
?
For example
, if I would like to study English, do I need to go to an
education
center, or my computer is
enought
?

Firstly
, computer
education
is cheaper, then classic
education
. I spend
only
less
then
one thousand rubles for the Internet per month. And I
get
access to
hudreds
web sites
, witch offered me English study material for free.

Secondly
I can build my
education
schedule
flexibly
. Morning or evening or night,
thenewer
I have free time, I can open BBC
webpage
and
lissaning
speaches
from native
british
people
.

In addition
, it is safe.
Espetial
in Coronavirus time. I have no chance to
be infected
over the Internet.

However
, I found, I have a
litle
progress in English
education
.
Espetial
with speaking and
pronuncietion
. Why?

First of all
, my brain is
allways
found reasons do not
lissening
BBC
dictors
,
but
watching
funy
youtube
movies and ramble over the web.

Secondly
, computer cant
check
my
prononciation
. I need alive native expat, to
improve
this part of English.

In conclusion
, I
deside
to
use
both
education
methods. English
education
center with native English teacher and computer
education
courses.
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IELTS essay Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.

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