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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement? A2De
In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that electronic trend take over. Everything needed is available at online market without paying single Penney. Some people concur that there are huge disadvantages of this digitalization. However, I quibble from them and propound that digital reading outnumbered the printed one. Nowadays, people attracted towards the digital social media whereas it is also free. Various evidences can be given to bolster my stand. The top-notch concrete reason is they don’t have to pay for the books or newspaper on internet while it costs some amount for printed ones. So it is human nature that why pay when it is free. Everyone trying to save money as much as they can. Another rational which hauls me to patron is E-books and E-newspaper are ecofriendly. Selecting the electronic media saves the tress which use for making the paper for printing upon. In this annihilating world, it is our duty to save an environment otherwise we will in the verge of extinction. The rearmost factor to be consider which cannot be neglected is accessibility of the newspaper and book on internet. It is very handy to access the electronic newspapers and books from anywhere like the price of cake and it don’t require the storage for containing. What is half full for some, may appear half empty to others. So the public in general tends to distinguish that electronic platform lead the printing culture in the verge of extinction. Reading from book or paper connect the emotions and some people have the hobby or profession to collect the rare books which worth tremendous amount of money in real life. In recapitulation, I reiterate that there are numerable strong factors supporting the Electronic platform. However, its contrary can be overlooked or controlled. Consequently I firmly agree that merits has more weight than demerits.
In this concurrent world, it is
undoubtedly
true that
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electronic
trend take over. Everything needed is available at online market without paying single Penney.
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Some
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people
concur that there are huge disadvantages of this digitalization.
However
, I quibble from them and propound that digital reading outnumbered the printed one.

Nowadays,
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people
attracted towards the digital social media whereas it is
also
free. Various evidences can be
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given
to bolster my stand. The top-notch concrete reason is they don’t
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have to
pay for the
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books
or newspaper on internet while it costs
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some
amount for printed ones.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
it is human nature that why pay when it is free. Everyone trying to save money as much as they can. Another rational which hauls me to patron is E-books and E-newspaper are
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ecofriendly
. Selecting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electronic
media saves the tress which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for making the paper for printing upon. In this annihilating world, it is our duty to save an environment
otherwise
we will in the verge of extinction. The rearmost factor to be
Consider using a past participle here: "considered".
consider
which cannot
be neglected
is accessibility of the newspaper and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
on internet. It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
handy to access the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electronic
newspapers and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
from anywhere like the price of cake and it
The pronoun 'it' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "doesn’t", "didn’t".
don’t
require the storage for containing.

What is half full for
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some
, may appear half empty to others.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
the public
in general
tends to distinguish that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electronic
platform lead the printing culture in the verge of extinction. Reading from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
or paper connect the emotions and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have the hobby or profession to collect the rare
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
which worth tremendous amount of money in real life.

In recapitulation, I reiterate that there are numerable strong factors supporting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Electronic
platform.
However
, its contrary can
be overlooked
or controlled.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Consequently
I
firmly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that merits has more weight than demerits.

IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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