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Computer using good or not ?

Computer using good or not ? BY1lj
Since the people adapt the computers till there wide arguments whether it’s good or bad, in this easy I will discuss main aspects about the case, While you are an employee or a student or teacher you are totally using this smart machine, due to it give shortcuts for both time and effort, in the past time the employees need thousands and thousands paper to save the people information and other documents, where they suffered a lot to find it if you need your documents again, but nowadays everything is available on the google engine, while you are at home you can open forms to make passport for instance, just imagine that can make everything on internet like buying or investment or make deals, Moreover this is good things for all human beings but in future thousands and thousands under the threat of losing their jobs owing to this huge shortcuts in different activities, for example the taxi driver in Norway suffering from this problem due to the people making everything by internet, this job in future totally will disappear according the Oxford news paper report in 2017. At the end, computers like other machines, weapon with two edges, according our using whether we depends on it totally or partially,
Since the
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people
adapt the computers till there wide arguments whether it’s
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good
or
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bad
, in this easy I will discuss main aspects about the case, While you are an employee or a student or teacher you are
totally
using this smart machine, due to it give shortcuts for both time and effort, in the
Did you mean "pastime"?
past time
the employees need thousands and thousands paper to save the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
information and other documents, where they suffered a lot to find it if you need your documents again,
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but
nowadays everything is available on the
"Google" is a proper noun and needs to be capitalized.
google
engine, while you are at home you can open forms to
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make
passport
for instance
,
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just
imagine that can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
everything on internet like buying or investment or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
deals,
Moreover
this is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
things for all human beings
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
in future thousands and thousands under the threat of losing their jobs owing to this huge shortcuts in
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different
activities,
for example
the taxi driver in Norway suffering from this problem due to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
making everything by internet, this job in future
totally
will disappear according the Oxford
This word is normally spelled as one.
news paper
report in 2017. At the
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end
, computers like other machines, weapon with two edges, according our using whether we
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depends
on it
totally
or
partially
,
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IELTS essay Computer using good or not ?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
210 words
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