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computer ownership 2002-2010

computer ownership 2002-2010 VEBRK

To begin with we can see how in both graphics there are a noticeable steepening. It is obvious that laptops markets and online resources have increase a lot in the past few years. Analyzing the first picture we see how In merely eight years the percentage of computers owners rised from around fifty-five to seventy-five. In less than a decade this numbers have experimented an incredible augmentation. On the other hand, in the picture above we notice a huge difference between educated owners and common users. Besides, if we take a look to the different levels we see that the most balanced group is the postgraduate with a fifteen percent between to years. On the contrary, other groups like first three ones show a bigger gap. To sump up we can collect the idea of a quick evolution in the usage of computers and digital media since the beginning of the education. It is impossible to deny the global digitalization.

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