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computer crime is a headache to the government

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The term hacker is the name of not only gifted people who are knowledgeable about computer technology but also malicious one. Nevertheless, quite a few of these computer criminals donot make strategic plans to steal or seize individual’s property. Conversely, they are interested in creating anonymous accounts, altering and deleting significant works and files on email of somebody. Moreover, many people are amusingly made fun of by the unwise jokes of these malicious hackers. They mostly donot consider the anguish of victim and think of their activities as normal pranks.
The term

hacker is the name of not
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only
gifted
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people
who are knowledgeable about

computer technology
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also
malicious one.
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computer criminals
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donot
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make
strategic plans to steal or seize individual’s

property.
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, they
are interested
in creating anonymous accounts,

altering and deleting significant works and files on email of somebody.

Moreover
,
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many
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people
are
amusingly
made fun of by the unwise jokes of these

malicious hackers. They
mostly
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donot
consider the anguish of victim and
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of their activities as normal pranks.
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IELTS essay computer crime is a headache to the government

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
90 words
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