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computer and online gaming should be banned at school do you agree or disagree?

computer and online gaming should be banned at school 53RVN

computer and online game have their own advantage in terms of enhancing imagination, creativity, increase computer operational skill. although i belive that computer and online gaming should be prohibited at school is good for students life. now a days student are more addicted towards digital gadget and computer games which is harm for them, my inclination is justified with following paragraph. most importantly student are go to school for their education, gathering knowledge, learning lesion so they have to focus on study. if they starts playing game in class then they will be distracted from main object in school and they will perform poor in exam, this will be negative consequence for both parents and school. hence out of all argument the strongest one prove my statement.

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