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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

A section of society consider that higher education is the most suitable path for getting a good profession. However, the others clame that hands on experience and social skill needed to getting job. To began with, university exam provides on with much needed qualification. University education follows a strict curriculum which is designed to include both theoretical knowledge and technical skills. IIT and IIM India for instance, there for qualification obtained from the university degree helps a person to persue the best employment opportunities.
A section of society consider that higher education is the most suitable path for getting a
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good
profession.
However
, the others
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clame
that hands on experience and social
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
needed to getting job. To began with, university exam provides on with
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much needed
qualification. University education follows a strict curriculum which
is designed
to include both theoretical knowledge and technical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. IIT and IIM India
for instance
, there for qualification obtained from the university degree
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
a person to
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persue
the best employment opportunities.

IELTS essay Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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