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Complaint against garbage collector

Complaint against garbage collector rxOJ

I am writing this letter to draw your attention on rubbish collection system in our area, 1, Street. Previously the system was working properly but right after there was a replacement held in the staff members, they discontinued the discipline maintained by the previous ones. For example nowadays they do not have any particular timing and bump at the door at any time of the day. Further more, the members are manner less and illiterate. This irregular behavior have a great impact on our day-to-day lifestyle. We as a whole, members of 1, Street affected in various ways including from stinking smell all day long, to heated arguments with the members on daily basis. There is less space left for children to walk, jog and play due to the fact of uncertainty previous day rubbish is collected on the streets. I would suggest training for the current members as per law or hire the previous skilled ones to eliminate the nuisance created every morning. Hence, we would be highly appreciable if you work on this as in the near future as possible.

I am writing this letter to draw your attention on rubbish collection system in our area, 1, Street.

Previously the system was working properly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 right after there was a replacement held in the staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrepresentative
members
, they discontinued the discipline maintained by the previous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
. For example
 nowadays they do not have any particular timing and bump at the door at any time of the day. Further
 more, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrepresentative
members
 are manner less and illiterate. This irregular behavior have a great impact on our day-to-day lifestyle.

We as a whole, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrepresentative
members
 of 1, Street This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 in various ways including from stinking smell all day long, to heated arguments with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrepresentative
members
 on daily basis. There is less space This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 for children to walk, jog and play due to the fact of uncertainty previous day rubbish is collected
 on the streets.

I would suggest training for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrepresentative
members
 as per law or hire the previous skilled You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
 to eliminate the nuisance created every morning. Hence
, we would be highly
 appreciable if you work on this as in the near future as possible. 