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Comparison of a village between 1930 and 2010

Comparison of a village between 1930 and 2010 G3jbo

The pictures show a stokeford village between 1930 and 2010 and changes that happened during these 80 years including demolishing some green palaces and constructing new buildings. In 1930 farmlands were observable in the stokeford but until 2010 they were destructed and new houses were constructed instead. In 2010 primary school in the village was extended and two new part were added to it. In the past there was not any retirement home for elderlies but a large house in the stokeford became a retirement home between 1930 and 2010. Two old shops were demolished after 1930 and it seems that there was not any shopping center in 2010! . In 2010 there was not any greenery and garden in stokeford and all of them superseded with new buildings unfortunately. So it is obvious that the stokeford was a green and nice village in the past but nowadays it is just a small city!

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show
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stokeford
 village between 1930 and 2010 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 that happened during these 80 years including demolishing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 green palaces and constructing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 buildings.

In 1930 farmlands were observable in the Possible spelling mistake found.stoke ford
stokeford
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 until 2010 they were destructed
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
were constructed
instead
. In 2010 primary school in the village was extended
 and two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 part were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to it. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 the past there was not any retirement home for Possible spelling mistake found.elder lies
elderlies
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a large This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 in the Possible spelling mistake found.stoke ford
stokeford
 became a retirement home between 1930 and 2010. Two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 shops were demolished
 after 1930 and it seems that there was not any shopping center in 2010! Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 In 2010 there was not any greenery and garden in Possible spelling mistake found.stoke ford
stokeford
 and all of them superseded with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 buildings unfortunately.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 it is obvious that the Possible spelling mistake found.stoke ford
stokeford
 was a green and nice village in the past This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 nowadays it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 city! 