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Decision that made up to this point in your life. Which have had a positive impact? Which have had a negative impact? Which are you proud of? Which do you try to hide from others?

Decision that made up to this point in your life. Which have had a positive impact? Which have had a negative impact? Which are you proud of? Which do you try to hide from others? kLVoR
It seems to me that being an overseas filipino worker is one of the positive decision that I make to support my family financially. And for me it will help me to gain work experience, earn a higher salary and for personal growth. The negative impact of working abroad is being away from my family and friends and missing them. Sometimes, I tried to hide to them if I'm not feeling okay so that they will not think more about me. And since that I'm leaving with my employer even though I feel terrible I need to get up and do my job. Being ETEEAP student is my own personal decision that I should be proud of even though is a big commitment but the rewards are plentiful. Having a college degree it prepares me intelectually and socially and also leads to overall happiness, stability and self esteem.
It seems to me that being an overseas
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filipino
worker is one of the
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positive
decision that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
to support my family
financially
. And for me it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to gain work experience, earn a higher salary and for personal growth. The
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impact of working abroad is being away from my family and friends and missing them.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Sometimes
, I tried to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hide
to them if I'm not feeling okay
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so
that they will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
more about me. And since that I'm leaving with my employer
even though
I feel terrible I need to
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get
up and do my job. Being
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ETEEAP
student is my
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own
personal decision that I should be proud of
even though
is a
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big
commitment
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but
the rewards are plentiful. Having a college degree it prepares me
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intelectually
and
socially
and
also
leads to
overall
happiness, stability and
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self esteem
.
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IELTS essay Decision that made up to this point in your life. Which have had a positive impact? Which have had a negative impact? Which are you proud of? Which do you try to hide from others?

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