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Decision that made up to this point in your life. Which have had a positive impact? Which have had a negative impact? Which are you proud of? Which do you try to hide from others?

Decision that made up to this point in your life. Which have had a positive impact? Which have had a negative impact? Which are you proud of? Which do you try to hide from others? kLVoR
It seems to me that being an overseas filipino worker is one of the positive decision that I make to support my family financially. And for me it will help me to gain work experience, earn a higher salary and for personal growth. The negative impact of working abroad is being away from my family and friends and missing them. Sometimes, I tried to hide to them if I'm not feeling okay so that they will not think more about me. And since that I'm leaving with my employer even though I feel terrible I need to get up and do my job. Being ETEEAP student is my own personal decision that I should be proud of even though is a big commitment but the rewards are plentiful. Having a college degree it prepares me intelectually and socially and also leads to overall happiness, stability and self esteem.
It seems to me that being an overseas
filipino
worker is one of the
positive
decision that I
make
to support my family
financially
. And for me it will
help
me to gain work experience, earn a higher salary and for personal growth. The
negative
impact of working abroad is being away from my family and friends and missing them.
Sometimes
, I tried to
hide
to them if I'm not feeling okay
so
that they will not
think
more about me. And since that I'm leaving with my employer
even though
I feel terrible I need to
get
up and do my job. Being
ETEEAP
student is my
own
personal decision that I should be proud of
even though
is a
big
commitment
but
the rewards are plentiful. Having a college degree it prepares me
intelectually
and
socially
and
also
leads to
overall
happiness, stability and
self esteem
.
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IELTS essay Decision that made up to this point in your life. Which have had a positive impact? Which have had a negative impact? Which are you proud of? Which do you try to hide from others?

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