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Comparison between city life and countryside life

Comparison between city life and countryside life Lb851
Nowadays, a majority of young people prefer living in the city to living in the country. However, elderly people would prefer to live in the countryside. Although humans can lead a happy life anywhere, there are still many differences between life in the city and life in urban areas, especially in the quality of life, environment, and job opportunities. First of all, an important problem is the standard of living. The cities usually provide a lot of facilities and social activities. For instance, there are many hospitals, cinemas, restaurants in cities. You can go to cinemas with friends, or you can do sports any time and anywhere. However, in the countryside, it is very dull because there are no cinemas, sports activities for people. Also, there are very few hospitals in the countryside due to healthcare being extremely limited, backward facilities.
Nowadays, a majority of young
people
prefer living in the city to living in the country.
However
, elderly
people
would prefer to
live
in the countryside. Although humans can lead a happy
life
anywhere, there are
still
many
differences between
life
in the city and
life
in urban areas,
especially
in the quality of
life
, environment, and job opportunities.

First of all
, an
important
problem is the standard of living. The
cities
usually
provide
a lot of
facilities and social activities.
For instance
, there are
many
hospitals, cinemas, restaurants in
cities
. You can go to cinemas with friends, or you can do
sports
any time and anywhere.
However
, in the countryside, it is
very
dull
because
there are no cinemas, sports activities for
people
.
Also
, there are
very
few hospitals in the countryside due to healthcare being
extremely
limited, backward facilities.
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IELTS essay Comparison between city life and countryside life

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