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Comparison between city life and countryside life

Comparison between city life and countryside life Lb851
Nowadays, a majority of young people prefer living in the city to living in the country. However, elderly people would prefer to live in the countryside. Although humans can lead a happy life anywhere, there are still many differences between life in the city and life in urban areas, especially in the quality of life, environment, and job opportunities. First of all, an important problem is the standard of living. The cities usually provide a lot of facilities and social activities. For instance, there are many hospitals, cinemas, restaurants in cities. You can go to cinemas with friends, or you can do sports any time and anywhere. However, in the countryside, it is very dull because there are no cinemas, sports activities for people. Also, there are very few hospitals in the countryside due to healthcare being extremely limited, backward facilities.
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prefer living in the city to living in the country.
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people
would prefer to
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live
in the countryside. Although humans can lead a happy
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anywhere, there are
still
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differences between
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in the city and
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in urban areas,
especially
in the quality of
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life
, environment, and job opportunities.

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, an
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problem is the standard of living. The
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cities
usually
provide
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a lot of
facilities and social activities.
For instance
, there are
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many
hospitals, cinemas, restaurants in
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cities
. You can go to cinemas with friends, or you can do
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sports
any time and anywhere.
However
, in the countryside, it is
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very
dull
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because
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.
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, there are
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few hospitals in the countryside due to healthcare being
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limited, backward facilities.

IELTS essay Comparison between city life and countryside life

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  American English
2 paragraphs
141 words
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