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Have you ever tried pizza? There are numerous pizza stores in Jakarta. But, there are 2 pizza stores that have been gaining a lot of popularity these days. They are pizza shacks and Mac’s pizza. Having tried both, I can tell that there are some similarities as well as some huge differences between the two stores. Have you ever tried pizza? There are numerous pizza stores in Jakarta, but there are 2 pizza stores that have been really popular these days. Pizza shack and Mac’s pizza. Having tried both, I can tell there are some similarities as well as some very big differences between the two pizza stores. Have you ever tried pizza? There are numerous pizza stores in Jakarta. But, there are 2 pizza stores that have been really popular lately. Pizza shack and Mac’s pizza. Having tried both, I can tell there are some similarities as well as some huge differences between the two pizza stores.
Have you ever
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pizza? There are numerous pizza
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stores
in Jakarta.
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But
, there are 2 pizza
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stores
that have been gaining
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a lot of
popularity these days. They are pizza shacks and Mac’s pizza. Having
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tried
both, I can
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tell
that there are
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some
similarities
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as well as
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some
huge differences between the two stores.

Have you ever
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tried
pizza? There are numerous pizza
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stores
in Jakarta,
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but
there are 2 pizza
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stores
that have been
really
popular these days. Pizza shack and Mac’s pizza. Having
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tried
both, I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
similarities
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as well as
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some
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very
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big
differences between the two pizza stores.

Have you ever
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tried
pizza? There are numerous pizza
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stores
in Jakarta.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, there are 2 pizza
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stores
that have been
really
popular lately. Pizza shack and Mac’s pizza. Having
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tried
both, I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
similarities
Probable usage error. Use "and" after 'both'.
as well as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
huge differences between the two pizza
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stores
.

IELTS essay comparing and contrasting pizza

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
158 words
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