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compare Viet nam and American

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Some people may think that Vietnamese and Americans are in different hemispheres, so they have nothing a lot in common. However, they share many similarities. One important similarity is their wedding ceremonies. Marriage ceremonies are significant for couples in both nations. Weddings are planned and before performing a wedding ceremony, couples have engagement ceremonies. The wedding reception is a time for the couple to share one of the most important days in their lives with their families and friends.
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IELTS essay compare Viet nam and American

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  American English
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79 words
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