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compare the advantage and disadvantage of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. state which you consider to be the most effective. Studying on your own, taking lessons with a private tutor, taking lessons as part of a class, taking lessons online, going to live in a country where the language is spoken.

Analyzed the positive aspects and drawbacks of education in the global level. We realized that the international language is more powerful and there are different ways to get education like hire a private mentor, learn by yourself, taking support from google and most essential to settle yourself in that country which place language is part and parcel of your life. So here in this essay we discuss both views how, where and in which way we use to adopt the different language. Actually, several people believe that education is a powerful weapon and with the help of that sword we can proof our self in the world and for that purpose we need some tutor whether that will be in the way of private educator or taking classes online. But according to the various people survey they mud the water that private tuition as many beneficial effects on students. Firstly, person can clarify their doubts easily and smoothly catch the techniques and tips from the experience teacher. Secondly, doubtlessly learn gain confidence rather than study hive off. While on the other hand, the number of people admit that picking classes on internet is enough to save time and paid less amount to the instructor as well as call the individual teacher. At the same time many people consider that if they will be the part of that country it’s easy for they determine many language. A s per above discussion to sum up my conclusion I agree that experienced played a vital role in our life and that thing we can gain only from one occurrences guider which will assist you how to use and when and where that education and language pull up your sock.
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education
in the global level. We realized that the international language is more powerful and there are
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different
ways to
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get
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education
like hire a private mentor, learn by yourself, taking support from google and most essential to settle yourself in that country which place language is part and parcel of your life.
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So
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use to
adopt the
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different
language.

Actually, several
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people
believe that
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education
is a powerful weapon and with the
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help
of that sword we can proof our self in the world and for that purpose we need
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some
tutor whether that will be in the way of private educator or taking classes online.
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But
according to the various
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people
survey
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun ‘they’. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
they mud
the water that private tuition as
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many
beneficial effects on students.
Firstly
, person can clarify their doubts
easily
and
smoothly
catch the techniques and tips from the experience teacher.
Secondly
,
doubtlessly
learn gain confidence
rather
than study hive off.

While
on the other hand
, the number of
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people
admit that picking classes on internet is
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enough
to save time and paid less amount to the instructor
as well
as call the individual teacher. At the same time
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many
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people
consider that if they will be the part of that country it’s easy for they determine
Possible agreement error. The noun language seems to be countable; consider using: “many languages”.
many language
.

Use “An” instead of ‘A’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.
A
s per above discussion to sum up my conclusion I
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agree
that experienced played a vital role in our life and that thing we can gain
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only
from one
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occurrences
guider which will assist you how to
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use
and when and where that
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education
and language pull up your sock.
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IELTS essay compare the advantage and disadvantage of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. state which you consider to be the most effective. Studying on your own, taking lessons with a private tutor, taking lessons as part of a class, taking lessons online, going to live in a country where the language is spoken.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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