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Compare or contrast life before and after an important invention.

Compare or contrast life before and after an important invention. m5Ya8

BLANK-TS- Before, we cooked rice on a wood fire, and the flavor of the rice was not perfect because when we cooked on a wood fire, the level of fire would not be modified easily. As a result, our rice would be overcooked and have a smell of burning. After there is the rice cooker, the standard of rice became better. Thanks to the auto-adjust and auto-cooked systems, they keep rice in the soft state constantly. In conclusion, in few decades ago, people – especially housewife used hard to cooking rice - but now the emerge of electric cooker which make our life become easier, more convenient and it played an indispensable role of our life. Moreover, we can take advantage of spare time to do more other mission. Beside recently we had created multiform of smart electric cooker which have reasonable price that anyone can possess them.

BLANK-TS- This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
, we cooked You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwheatgraincornbran
rice
 on a wood fire, and the flavor of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwheatgraincornbran
rice
 was not perfect This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 when we cooked on a wood fire, the level of fire would not be modified
easily
. As a result
, our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwheatgraincornbran
rice
 would be overcooked
 and have a smell of burning. After there is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwheatgraincornbran
rice
 cooker, the standard of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwheatgraincornbran
rice
 became better. Thanks to the auto-adjust and auto-cooked systems, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwheatgraincornbran
﻿rice
 in the soft state constantly
.

In conclusion
, in few decades ago, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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–
especially
 housewife This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to cooking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwheatgraincornbran
rice
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'emerge' is correct. If 'emerge' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the emerge
 of electric cooker which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 our life become easier, more convenient and it played an indispensable role of our life. Moreover
, we can take advantage of spare time to do more other mission. Beside recently we had created multiform of smart electric cooker which have reasonable price that anyone can possess them. 