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Compare and contrast traditional class and online class

Compare and contrast traditional class and online class 2aRoX
The technology develops faster and faster with modern industrialization so that several learning platforms are created to help the student learn easily. However, traditional classes and online classes are the most popular ones. Despite sharing some similarities, the differences between the two are remarkable. In a traditional class, students have to go to class in reality. It may be difficult for students living far from school. They not only must go a long way but they also may get stuck in traffic. Moreover, a class usually starts at a permanent and steady time. If someone can not attend the class, they will miss the period and have to self-study. In contrast, students just need a computer or mobile with an internet connection to participate in class. So that all students can take part in the meeting no matter how far they are. Online class also has flexible time, student can exchange views with teacher when they are busy and attend another online class to catch up lesson. The second dissimilarity is learning style. Students in the traditional class have a chance to interact with teachers and friends, so that they can perceive their shortcomings and correct the fault. This will help students feel easier when learning. In my opinion, learning with many people is a good way to make progress in improving marks. In online classes, learners may have trouble cooperating with teachers. Because of COVID 19 pandemic, students have to learn online and it is extremely challenging with grade 1 students. They do not know how to use computer and work with teachers; they also need a supervisor to promote awareness of learning. When learning online, the network connection may be unstable. For instance, in listening lesson, if the network is interrupted, learners can not hear the blanks and can not complete exercises. They may be miss class if the electricity is turned off. In traditional classes, students do not need to worry about the internet connection because they have opportunities to learn with teachers in real life. So that they can maximize the effect of learning Besides all the differences between traditional and online classes but it also has common ground. Despite teaching in any way, teachers always try to bring useful classes and impart all the knowledge to clarify for students. So in my opinion, students have to overcome obstacles to learn effectively as much as they can
The technology develops faster and faster with modern industrialization
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that several
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learning
platforms
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help
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student
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learn
easily
.
However
,
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traditional
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classes
and
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online
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classes
are the most popular ones. Despite sharing
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some
similarities, the differences between the two are remarkable.

In a
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traditional
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class
,
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students
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have to
go to
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class
in reality. It may be difficult for
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students
living far from school. They not
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only
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must
go a long way
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they
also
may
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get
stuck in traffic.
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usually
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starts
at a permanent and steady time. If someone can not attend the
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class
, they will miss the period and
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have to
self-study.
In contrast
,
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students
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just
need a computer or mobile with an internet connection to participate in
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class
.
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all
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students
can
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take part
in the meeting no matter how far they are.
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Online
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class
also
has flexible time,
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student
can exchange views with
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teacher
when they are busy and attend another
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online
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class
to catch up lesson.

The second dissimilarity is
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learning
style.
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in the
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traditional
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class
have a chance to interact with
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teachers
and friends,
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so
that they can perceive their shortcomings and correct the fault. This will
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help
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students
feel easier when
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learning
. In my opinion,
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learning
with
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many
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people
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is
a
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good
way to
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make
progress in improving marks. In
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online
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classes
, learners may have trouble cooperating with
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teachers
.
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Because
of
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COVID 19
pandemic,
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students
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have to
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learn
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online
and it is
extremely
challenging with grade 1
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students
. They do not know how to
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use
computer and work with
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teachers
; they
also
need a supervisor to promote awareness of learning.

When
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learning
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, the network connection may be unstable.
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, in listening lesson, if the network
is interrupted
, learners can not hear the blanks and can not complete exercises. They may be miss
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class
if the electricity
is turned
off. In
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traditional
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classes
,
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students
do not need to worry about the internet connection
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because
they have opportunities to
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learn
with
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teachers
in real life.
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So that
they can maximize the effect of
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learning


Besides
all the differences between
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traditional
and
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online
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classes
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but
it
also
has common ground. Despite teaching in any way,
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teachers
always try to bring useful
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classes
and impart all the knowledge to clarify for
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students
.
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So
in my opinion,
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students
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have to
overcome obstacles to
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learn
effectively
as much as they
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can

IELTS essay Compare and contrast traditional class and online class

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
400 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
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