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Compare and contrast life before and after mobile phone invention

Compare and contrast life before and after mobile phone invention OwgXE
The invention of mobile phones has changed everything. Before its invention, it is difficult to call up families and friends. People communicated with each other by using physical devices like writing letters, or using phone booths located at every streets, but these ways took a long time to contact. Nowadays, with a mobile phone, people can call and text to everyone anytime. Mobile phone become one of the inseperable things in human’s life. In the old days without mobile phones, people used to write a letter to convey the messages. They have to buy envelopes and stamps, after that, they have to drive to the post office to send letters. They had to wait for the replies, it took about one week. But now, people can contact someone anywhere, anytime by calling or texting on the phone and have replies in a few minutes. It saves much time for us to do other important works instead of waiting for the replies. Before mobile phones, people knew the news about the countries by reading the newspaper, listening to the radio and watching TV with neighbors. At that time, newspapers, radios and televisions are expensive. In the morning, people in the poor village used to borrow newspapers from the family who had money to buy or listen from anyone who knew that information. In the evening, the whole village gather around to watch a small TV. Today, it is hard to find people do that. Every houses have their own mobile phones. Only a mobile phone with Internet connection, people can know everything what happens in that day of the world without paying money. Before the invention of mobiles phones was born, after many stressful lessons at school, students came out with friends, played until their parents called to come back home or ran to a shop to buy a newspaper for teenagers called “Hoa Hoc Tro”, bring to school and read with their classmates. Conversely, everything is different. Today students only want to come home quickly to rest and surf the Internet with a mobile phone on their hand. In conclusion, with mobile phone, people can use it to contact to other people and surf the Internet. It change everyone’s life so quickly that nowadays, humans are not able to live without it. Although having a mobile phone, people should talk to each other face-to-face so that they can be closer.
The invention of mobile
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communicated with each
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by using physical devices like writing letters, or using
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booths located at every
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,
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can call and text to everyone anytime. Mobile
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become one of the
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days without mobile
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mobile
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,
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knew the news about the countries by reading the
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, listening to the radio and watching TV with neighbors. At that time,
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, radios and televisions are expensive. In the morning,
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in the poor village
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from the family who had money to
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or listen from anyone who knew that information. In the evening, the whole village gather around to
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a mobile
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with Internet connection,
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back home or ran to a shop to
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on their hand.

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, with mobile
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IELTS essay Compare and contrast life before and after mobile phone invention

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