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Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local committees to what extent do you agree

Now a days extracurricular activities are gaining much importance because of their benefits people working at certain center should be equipped with social benefits as well as sports. I partially agree with this statement below I am going to elaborate my thoughts. Firstly individuals should spend a specific time duration in doing some sports activities as they are best for their health and well-being This responsibility falls on the shoulders of people who provide job to them. Local member should take part in such activities in order to keep themselves fit and healthy. places are devoted for them specifically and time management is key criteria. However there are some negative impacts also as people get distracted from their goals as they are involved. That will definitely effects their future. for instance lot of opportunities given by company including social and sports definitely employee will prefer them as compare to their duties that will effect there performance. In my conclusion companies should give opportunities but to limited extent so that life work balance will be mantaines

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Now a days
 extracurricular activities are gaining much importance This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of their benefits This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 working at certain center should be equipped
 with social benefits as well
 as sports. I partially
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agree
 with this statement below I am going to elaborate my thoughts. Firstly
 individuals should spend a specific time duration in doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 sports activities as they are best for their health and well-being This responsibility falls on the shoulders of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who provide job to them. Local member should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in such activities in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 themselves fit and healthy. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Places
places
are devoted
 for them specifically
 and time management is key criteria. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
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some
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negative
 impacts also
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people
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get
 distracted from their goals as they are involved
. That will definitely The modal verb ‘will’ requires the verb’s base form.effect
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 their future. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.For
for
 instance lot of opportunities This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 including social and sports definitely employee will prefer them as compare to their duties that will Did you mean “affect” (have an effect upon)?affect
effect
 there performance. In my conclusion This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 should give opportunities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 to limited extent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that life work balance will be Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.mantaines.mantaines!mantaines?mantaines:mantaines,mantaines;
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