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Colors can make your world beautiful or gloomy

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Colors can make your world beautiful or gloomy. Change is important to everyone. The colors They affect us f fact, colors have meanings. For example, the red color is the symbol of love and passion. The black means power while the green color is the symbol of nature. I believe that colors control our mentally and physical health. For me, I love white color it makes me feel peaceful and happy. To sum up, all colors have different effects on us and everyone positively or negatively.
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Change
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to everyone. The colors They affect us f fact, colors have meanings.
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, the red
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color
is the symbol of
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love
and passion. The black means power while the green
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color
is the symbol of nature. I believe that colors control our mentally and physical health. For me, I
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love
white
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IELTS essay Colors can make your world beautiful or gloomy

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  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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