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Cohabitation can help youngsters to have better under standing before getting married. Do you agree or disagree

Cohabitation can help youngsters to have better under standing before getting married. mbK8L
It is widely believed that cohabitation among youngsters is beneficial since it helps them to understand each other before starting a marital life. this essay will agree with the statement and I will explain relevant reasons in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with the reasons behind this agreement first and foremost one is that having a relationship before marriage may be a parameter for young people to judge their partner. to elaborate it as young people are less mature and they do not show trust even if they are in relationship hence young partners stay together and cohabitate to show their loyalty. for instance an Organisation named International family meditation (IFM) delved into a research in 2019 and found that 67% of successful relationships are proved to be of those individuals who are staying together with a good relationship from their young age. Another imperative reason is that having a sexual relationship before marriage help to generate a sense of respect among partners what I mean to say is that if both partners should decide to go cohabitate before getting into a lawful relationship this serves as a foundation for their better relation in future therefore and understanding among partner is key to a respectful marital life. Moreover young people can get full satisfaction with their personal choice. In conclusion, the said notion is proved to be very beneficial for young individuals since it provides them a way to judge their partner's behavior as well as it creates a sense of respect among them.
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believed that cohabitation among youngsters is beneficial since it
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helps
them to understand each other
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before
starting a
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marital
life.
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this
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agree
with the statement and I will
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explain
relevant reasons in upcoming paragraphs.

To commence with the reasons behind this agreement
first
and foremost one is that having a
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relationship
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before
marriage may be a parameter for
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young
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people
to judge their
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partner
.
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to
elaborate it as
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young
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people
are less
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mature and
they do not
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show
trust even if they are in
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relationship
hence
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young
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partners
stay together and
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cohabitate
to
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show
their loyalty.
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for
instance an
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named International family meditation (IFM) delved into
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a research
in 2019 and found that 67% of successful
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relationships
are proved
to be of those individuals who are staying together with a
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good
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relationship
from their
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young
age.

Another imperative reason is that having a sexual
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relationship
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before
marriage
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help
to generate a sense of respect among
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partners
what I mean to say is that if both
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partners
should decide to go
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cohabitate
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before
getting into a lawful
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relationship
this serves as a foundation for their better relation in future
therefore
and understanding among
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partner
is key to a respectful
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marital
life.
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Moreover
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young
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people
can
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get
full satisfaction with their personal choice.

In conclusion
, the said notion
is proved
to be
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very
beneficial for
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young
individuals since it provides them a way to judge their partner's behavior
as well
as it creates a sense of respect among them.
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IELTS essay Cohabitation can help youngsters to have better under standing before getting married.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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