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Write a essay on the topic" Life is Beautiful".

Write a essay on the topic" Life is Beautiful". bDgoq
LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL Life is a journey in which we come across many beautiful phase as well as some phases were so hurtful that we feel the pain just by thinking about it. People think that this new era of living and by the use of technology would give all information and knowledge, they would feel the ease of living but that’s not the truth. This new world is more informative; more advanced, and has good communication between the different countries. The improvement that the world came across through is very impressive but the way we live is completely changed. Life is not just about having a good education, higher salary than everyone, and having a luxurious job. Life is not also about how much money you save for the future, it’s just about what going on now. Generally when a child is born his elders, and all the so called relatives decide within no moment that what he/she could be in the future. So they parents are pressurized by them to give him/her a higher education so that he could lead a good life. This chain continues till one achieves the goal. So just take time to think that did god gave us life just because we could earn money and fulfill what the society says. People always judge the happiness in a person’s life on the basis how much he earns. But people don’t think about the fact that the one who get higher salary would be able to give just a minimum time of 9 to 8 hrs and that too they spend that in sleeping and the rest time in getting ready for the job. But the one who works less but earn a sufficient amount always get a time to have the food with family. He spends a lot of his time with the family. So just think who is the happiest person is or whose life is more beautiful. The one who has no time as well as no will to understand the household problems or the one who does every possible thing to solve the problems of his families. There was a saying that “Health is wealth” but now for this new era it has changed to “The more you loss health the more earn the wealth”. So at the end the only thing that I want to convey by this essay is that don’t waste your life just running for money. As life is world’s most precious, beautiful, unbuyable thing that god has gifted us. I would suggest that don’t wait for a grand reason to get happy because the more you wait for reasons the more sadness you get. Life is just a game you cannot guess the future but you can enjoy the present. So the last but not the least, “You can buy a house but not family, you can buy a clock but not the time, you can buy death but cannot buy life”.
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LIFE
IS
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BEAUTIFUL


Life is
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a journey in
which we
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come
across
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many
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beautiful
phase
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some
phases were
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so
hurtful that we feel the pain
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just
by thinking about it.
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People
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think
that this new era of living and by the
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use
of technology would give all information and knowledge, they would feel the
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ease
of living
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but
that’s not the truth. This new world is more informative; more advanced, and has
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good
communication between the
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different
countries. The improvement that the world came across through is
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very
impressive
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but
the way we
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live
is completely
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changed
.

Life is not
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just
about having a
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good
education, higher salary than everyone, and having a luxurious job.
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Life
is not
also
about how much money you save for the future, it’s
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just
about what going on
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now
.
Generally
when a child
is born
his elders, and all the
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so called
relatives decide within no moment that what he/she could be in the future.
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So
they parents
are pressurized
by them to give him/her a higher education
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so
that he could lead a
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good
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life
. This chain continues till one achieves the goal.

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So
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just
take
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time
to
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that did god gave us
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life
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just
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because
we could
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earn
money and fulfill what the society says.
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People
always judge the happiness in a person’s
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life
on the basis how much he
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earns
.
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But
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people
don’t
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think
about the fact that the one
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who
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get
higher salary would be able to give
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just
a minimum
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time
of 9 to 8 hrs and that too they spend that in sleeping and the rest
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time
in getting ready for the job.
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But
the one
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who
works less
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but
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earn
a sufficient amount always
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get
a
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time
to have the food with family. He spends
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a lot of
his
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time
with the family.

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So
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just
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think
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who
is the happiest person is or whose
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life
is more
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beautiful
. The one
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who
has no
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time
as well
as no will to understand the household problems or the one
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who
does every possible thing to solve the problems of his families. There was a saying that “Health is wealth”
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but
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now
for this new era it has
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changed
to “The more you
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loss
health the more
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earn
the wealth”.

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So
at the
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end
the
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only
thing that I want to convey by this essay is that don’t waste your
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life
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just
running for money. As
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life
is world’s most precious,
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beautiful
,
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unbuyable
thing that god has gifted us. I would suggest that don’t wait for a grand reason to
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get
happy
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because
the more you wait for reasons the more sadness you
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get
.
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Life
is
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just
a game you cannot guess the future
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but
you can enjoy the present.
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So
the last
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but
not the least, “You can
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buy
a
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house
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but
not family, you can
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buy
a clock
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but
not the
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time
, you can
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buy
death
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but
cannot
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life”
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IELTS essay Write a essay on the topic" Life is Beautiful".

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
496 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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