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Cluture around the world are becoming more simillar. What fo you think are the reasons for it? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Cluture around the world are becoming more simillar. What fo you think are the reasons for it? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? G66Q
It is a true fact that, some of the tradition are extremely followed same way by the people all over the world and what are the plethora of reasons behind this aswellas the merits and demerits belongs to this baground. This essay will discuss about these point of views before draw a opinion. First of all, most of the people and system in our nation even the universe follow same way like others they do. Firstly every education sector provide more importance to english language taught. In addition, young generation also went to english medium, because of the tradition that followed by their family. Secondly, all industrial areas in respected territory they definietly choose automation procedures for their industry. Due to this there was a large impact on the annual profit. For instance, maruthi car manufactures introduce new high technology in to the field. Apart from that, due to a random passion continued by the world there was a huge demerits can be observed. The importance gave to the teaching english languages our younger generation they dont even know the local languages, which was the one belongs their mothe tonuge. A good illustration for this is, young people and family prefer english their has been a lack of knowledge obtained in their history and cluture. On the other hand, introduction of high skilled technology to the working territory gave a negative imapcts to the manpower. Thus, this will be lead to an loss of jobs for people who run their daliy life by the industry and also company dont want to look their industious. However, they just terminate them. In conclusion, introducing a same way of cluture to the daily life was a positive move but this will leads to an disadvantage for lot of people, who they financially backward and i hoped that government take necessary steps to tackle these problems and their by encourage people to move forward.
It is a true fact that,
some of the
tradition are
extremely
followed same way by the
people
all over the world and what are the plethora of reasons behind this
aswellas
the merits and demerits belongs to this
baground
. This essay will
discuss about these
point of views
before
draw
a
opinion.
First of all
, most of the
people
and system in our nation even the universe follow same way like others they do.
Firstly
every education sector provide more importance to
english
language taught.
In addition
, young generation
also
went to
english
medium,
because
of the tradition that followed by their family.
Secondly
, all industrial areas in respected territory they
definietly
choose automation procedures for their industry. Due to this there was a large impact on the annual profit.
For instance
,
maruthi
car manufactures introduce new high technology in to the field. Apart from that, due to a random passion continued by the world there was a huge
demerits
can
be observed
. The importance gave to the teaching
english
languages our younger generation they
dont
even know the local languages, which was the one belongs their
mothe
tonuge
. A
good
illustration for this is, young
people
and family prefer
english
their has been a lack of knowledge obtained in their history and
cluture
.
On the other hand
, introduction of high skilled technology to the working territory gave a
negative
imapcts
to the manpower.
Thus
, this will be lead to
an
loss of jobs for
people
who run their
daliy
life by the industry and
also
company
dont
want to look their
industious
.
However
, they
just
terminate them.
In conclusion
, introducing a same way of
cluture
to the daily life was a
positive
move
but
this will leads to
an
disadvantage for lot of
people
, who they
financially
backward and
i
hoped that
government
take necessary steps to tackle these problems and their by encourage
people
to
move
forward.
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IELTS essay Cluture around the world are becoming more simillar. What fo you think are the reasons for it? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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  American English
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320 words
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